JustSomeLiam's Reviews

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Really cool track, I love how varied this feels. I think that cool bridges you put in between the dance "verses" added to the track quite nicely. The synths you used sounded full and warm, especially directly after the halfway point of the track. The only thing I think you could improve on or could make the track better would be to make the "verses" (for example 1:15 - 1:35) I mentioned earlier sound a little bit less generic as far as dance music goes. While it sounds really great and somewhat unique it does seem to fit snuggly in a dance music trope. Still really great though! Great concept and approach for a song.

BurneMusic responds:

Thank you for the detailed review!
It means a lot and it shows me that you like the track enough to write about it like that.
I definitely agree with the verses sounding a little generic at times, and I'd say that's mainly because I'm still learning a lot with production and understanding how to do things in unique ways, which can be difficult at times.
Again, thank you for the detailed feedback/review and I'm glad you enjoyed the track. :))

[Simple Vibes]

Funky! Love the guitar in this. Bass is kicking also.

[infront of the unknown]

I like the sound of this a lot. I think the way the guitar and the synths just kind of float during the verses is very nice. But I do think you have some areas you can improve. The synth line in the chorus isn't terrible but it feels a bit out of place, maybe a little dissonant? I can't really tell, but the way it plays at the last chorus with the other walking synth is very cool! I'd say the two weakest things are the transitions between the verses and chorus and your singing. Each verse feels disjointed from the chorus, I'm not sure what you could do to fix that in this case, maybe adding a quick bridge that introduces the synth before the chorus? Your singing is by no means bad. I think with more time you'll get even better. Other than that, I really like the song. The lyrics are pretty good too. Keep working and uploading and I'm sure you'll get even better!

Gowlz responds:

Hey man, thank you so much for your feedback!

[fem hellbent]

eat my ass

[Widowmaker]

more nude.
also great colors my dude

Dan responds:

tHANKS FAM B)

[Like a family]

Your colors look great in this! The shading also looks pretty superb. Good job, yo.

damian-fluffy-doge responds:

ah thank you ;v; your comment is really apreciated